night photograph taken in Brighton and the journey during which I creating an imaginary couple “Paul” and “Laura” whose relationship had ended and a separate blog for ‘Paul”. I have also already outlined the contextual background. “Paul’s” blog has an eclectic mix of images that reflect and expand his mood of the day . In this sense the images are visually consistent with the blog posts, as per the Assignment brief. However, what I have also been aiming for is to see if I can produce a set of images that in themselves are visually consistent, whilst reflecting the mood of the blog as I am perceiving it as a “viewer”. It makes sense to me and I’m just hoping that it will make sense to my tutor and eventually the Assessors, as well as others who read my blog.
Additionally I have posted two links to YouTube videos – a Frank Sinatra song and a video film from the Dictionary of Obscure Sorrows. I also created a separate email address for “Paul”. Paul’s blog can be read here in the default WordPress format or in a chronological format here .
My response as Viewer
When reading the blog posts I felt a need to represent the obsessive nature of “Paul’s” yearning for “Laura” but, at the same time, also felt a need to create some still life images. I believe this was through a parallel impulse to achieve more of an objective distance from this yearning whilst trying to capture some essence of “Laura”. I decided to create the still life photographs in both landscape and portrait format to see which would fit best with the other images. I used my Canon 60D for these images, on a tripod for stability as I have made use of ambient light. I used some props – a cake stand, small Japanese statuettes, tulips and some artificial daffodils and also acquainted myself with origami. In all I made 138 photographs and as a first selection starred 41 of these in Adobe Bridge to work on. I chose 31 to convert to PSD/PNG and then narrowed this down to 24. Contact sheet for these is below
My fourth selection comprised 17 images
I also decided to have a look back at images used in “Paul’s” blog and selected five of these
Decision Process on Final Selection
There were four that really appealed to me (two of them from “Paul’s” blog),
Unfortunately they weren’t sufficient on their own and didn’t fit with any of the others. I don’t know what it is about them that I like to look at even though I’ve pondered this for quite some time. In the event, I’ve have chosen eight images as a final selection:-
Final Selection of 8 images
I’m aware that the first and seventh images are similar, as they both contain a laptop, but the message is different. One of the queries in my mind arising from the blog has been to what extent “Paul” actually sees “Laura” as a real person. Is it really her he is obsessed with or is he obsessed with the idea of her? Had he reached a stage where he had decided he wanted ‘to settle down’ and then looked for someone who would fit his vision? That’s where the question “Who is Laura” can be seen on his laptop. Maybe he is now coming to grips with that and it’s something that he might bring up in his therapy group. How much does that distinction between the real and imagined person come into every intimate relationship between two people? We all have a feminine and masculine side of us – anima and animus – and one realisation that struck me with some force is how much of a feminine aspect had crept into my subconscious and then revealed herself in the still life images. It’s as if “Laura” was attempting to reveal herself and express her point of view. It looks delicate and fragile and I felt irritated about this at first. Where was the strong assertive woman? It’s as if she said “No” to the relationship, reinforced it in writing, and still “Paul” won’t accept this. I chose portrait aspect for the still-life images. ’m not sure about the space around the objects. Should there be more at the sides, are they too compressed? Another question I ask myself is how would I present the images? A set of diptychs like this
or on separate pages, say in a book. Do I make them equal or do I have a fold-out page where the still life takes up a third and the ‘real life’ two-thirds; what about proportionality? I’ll play around with some ideas whilst waiting for feedback from my tutor.
So far as the Assessment Criteria are concerned
Demonstration of Technical and Visual Skills
I think I’ve met this so far as the images themselves are concerned and creation of “Paul’s” blog. I want to improve my design skills in terms of physical presentation – how to choose the most appropriate format and how to edit images into a book. There has been recent discussion concerning this on the WeAreOCA blog on 14th April and I hope that something comes of the idea of some additional input into creating and editing photo books.
Quality of Outcome
Comments on my previous blog posts have reassured me that, at least for those readers, I have been able to communicate my concept for this Assignment and the process I’ve followed. I’m still slightly unsure regarding that mix of real and still-life images so will await feedback on this.
Demonstration of Creativity
I took a risk with this project and needed to convince my tutor that I would be able to carry it through without getting myself too mired in complexity. I’ve aimed to follow his advice to make it an exploratory piece of work. It’s certainly been experimental and I’ve learned a lot from it. I also sought initial feedback on “Paul’s” Blog from two fellow students on the more advanced Levels before I made it public, and then sought feedback and advice from members of the Thames Valley OCA group.
I wrote a comprehensive piece on this here that evidences the firm ground on which the project rests and the variety of influences and sources that have informed my thinking and progress.
I thoroughly enjoyed working on this Assignment. The suggested reading was inspiring and encouraged me to research further and I gave myself a wonderful opportunity to try out a variety of approaches and also include some of my own poetry on “Paul’s” blog. I’m looking forward to feedback from my tutor to see where I need to improve and how I can develop this concept further.
20th April 2015
Links to “Paul’s” Blog
WordPress default format: https://pjdumont.wordpress.com
Chronological format : https://pjdumont.wordpress.com/2015/?order=asc